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March 29, 2012
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(UPDATED FILE ON FEB 21.2013! Changed some shading)
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Got something to say here? >:D

Critiques welcome.
The nose looks just so DAMN wrong but I really odn't know how to fix that.. Any ideas?!

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This time shirtless, because nudity rocks and I'm such a badass. HOORAY. Nope, just kidding. This was more because of anatomy studies. Wanted to draw something really fucked up.
So. That's how someone looks like living in a hard, effed-up fantasy world without any money left, almost nothing to eat and always wielding that damn, dragon-cursed claymore to protect their beloved ones against Ogres and Orcs...



Btw, she's a Half-Sídh and the main character of many of my own writings.


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Don't know, after struggling week after week with so much pain in my right arm and right hand (tennisarm + kind of artrosis) I can say I'm almost without any pain for two days now... whatever happened it feels great and so I was taking that chance to color the pencil portrait of Kina:



Whatever happened to my my arm+hand was awesome and I'm thankful for it...beside this, I'm really satisfied with the coloring here, even it's not that perfect. OH! No. I think it's almost perfect. At least a little bit. Almost. Kinda. Ohhh.

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nope. Hurts again. Dayum.

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shouldn't this be traditional ? correct me if I'm wrong .... maybe mixed media? hmmmm as for the nose i don't think its the worst part actually , might be better if you don't make it as pointy. another part that i think could use improvement is the shoulder and waist part ,
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*KinaAmaralia Jul 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Traditional when it was edited and colored digitally? Mixed media seems about right, yeah. Didn't thought about that since "mixed media" was more about using different types of pencils, papers n stuff for me.

As I look at it now the nose is still horrible and probably you're right about its pointyness. I only thought about the perspective which still confuses me.

Shoulder part? What do you mean? Since she is/was pretty muscular (slowly becoming yet very thin because of the lack of nutrition) I'm quite confused about how to put the right level between "skinny and starving" and "trained, overused muscles" (since she's not doing much anymore than sword fighting and blacksmithing).

Waist? Nah, There wasn't actually intended one here in first place, just colors and lines fading into pointlessness. But thanks, I'll try to keep an eye on that next time!
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